Pretty damn funny, fella. Not to mention, fine plucking.
Wish i could make a twang as sweet as what you play. Just perfect.
thanks! thank you for listening!
Love this little bit, makes me feel like i'm sitting on a rocking chair, on a shambly porch in the bayou.
I liked it in the beginning, even though it was bland, but when you added the later layers it worked, but only to the sense of fitting. It doesn't sound very good with the layers added onto the keyboard bit. It honestly mangles the potential of the keyboard loop.
Pretty nice sounding, a great ambient track, with the children adding a good background texture, but nothing makes it feel particularly special past that. You still can't ignore the gentle soloing tone's deep lull, that is very relaxing.
"but nothing makes it feel particularly special past that."
Not sure what you were looking for, but I appreciate the review nonetheless.
A lot of filler space you could toss fragments in for a greater accent, and i think the bass could give you a lot more kick and work better with the song that way.
Yea, this song is basically like 4 different loops arranged in different ways. That's just due to my laziness when it comes to making patterns XD
Spiffy, ol' boy.
I like it, as ambient goes it's got a great effect as a soundtrack, but for a standalone song i feel like it's missing parts and pieces. Also, just in my opinion, i think 1:50 is way too far in for the charge up, if you want to hook quicker, put that in sooner.
May I ask, what pieces do you think it's missing? A PM would be nice. I'll try to listen to it again though to see what you think is missing. Thanks for telling me about that.
I've gotten a complaint about the "chargeup" sound before, but it doesn't seem like it would fit earlier in the song... seems like it would break flow then. I'll try it at least.
Thank you for the review and tips!
I love how well it's layered and the sounds really just work so well in contrast. I'd actually go to clubs if they played music like this.
A lot of room to build on.
The singer could be better, he could take some lessons or something, or get a different guy. The guitar is pretty scratchy and uneven in levels with the singer. Also, you'd probably want a few more layers of sound, so i'm making pretty much studio remarks on your simple cover, it might not even apply to you.
Well ur rite about me never taking any singing lessons. But thanks for the feed back.
I love the blues, and i love the work ya bid on the Sagittarian 2. You guys really brings together one hell of a gruff tone.
Thanks man.. :)
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